Finished Chapter 1: Currently Editing

I am currently finished chapter 1 and attempting to edit parts in the plot, in the introduction, and in simple mechanics. Please bare with me until further notice. Unfortunately, I have English, and math worksheets to finish. They are at the higher part of 1 grade above me, to the lower part of two grades above me. I will post a further notice soon.

Hello Everyone.

This will be a blog with an intended purpose of broadcasting my story, and receiving non-biased comments / criticism which will help improve it. The story is called: Silent Peace. I have currently finished the prologue. Enjoy reading~

Prologue:

From the beginning of time, humans longed for one entity, Peace. There were two separate worlds which both longed for peace: “Mundus Vetus”, known as the old world, and “Mundus Novus”, known as the new world. These names were marked on an ancient stone tablet which was believed to be over a thousand years ago. The old world believed that peace would only exist if all entities were to cease to exist. The old world however, could not be destroyed because of a spell that continues to recreate, and protect it. The new world believed that peace would only exist through the creation of a utopia, an ideal world for everyone where conflict would cease to exist. The creation of a utopia was unable to be achieved because of the power they lacked. These two dreams were born from two organizations, one in each world: End, and Rebirth. End was responsible for nearly all the destruction in the old world, while Rebirth was response for the birth of life itself in the new world. Two extremely gifted individuals named Chaos, and Unity were the leaders of those two groups. Through their entire life, they have searched for their dream, their answer to peace. A bloody day came when both left the world. Their dreams were entrusted to two children. Those two children eventually became the leader of their organization, striving to achieve a goal that was seemingly impossible. Just when almost everyone lost hope of their dream, another ancient stone tablet was discovered. It revealed information about the origin of existence, the existence of magic/techniques, and an unsolvable problem. Through the existence of magic, both worlds started to advance in their plan once again. These methods of peace continued until the birth of two children...