Prologue:
From the beginning of time, humans longed for one entity, Peace. There were two separate worlds which both longed for peace: “Mundus Vetus”, known as the old world, and “Mundus Novus”, known as the new world. These names were marked on an ancient stone tablet which was believed to be over a thousand years ago. The old world believed that peace would only exist if all entities were to cease to exist. The old world however, could not be destroyed because of a spell that continues to recreate, and protect it. The new world believed that peace would only exist through the creation of a utopia, an ideal world for everyone where conflict would cease to exist. The creation of a utopia was unable to be achieved because of the power they lacked. These two dreams were born from two organizations, one in each world: End, and Rebirth. End was responsible for nearly all the destruction in the old world, while Rebirth was response for the birth of life itself in the new world. Two extremely gifted individuals named Chaos, and Unity were the leaders of those two groups. Through their entire life, they have searched for their dream, their answer to peace. A bloody day came when both left the world. Their dreams were entrusted to two children. Those two children eventually became the leader of their organization, striving to achieve a goal that was seemingly impossible. Just when almost everyone lost hope of their dream, another ancient stone tablet was discovered. It revealed information about the origin of existence, the existence of magic/techniques, and an unsolvable problem. Through the existence of magic, both worlds started to advance in their plan once again. These methods of peace continued until the birth of two children...
Sounds nice. Continue the story :D
ReplyDeleteYeah i like it, chapter one plz ;D
ReplyDeleteReminds me of the Naruto movie. Making the perfect world or utopia. The plot line is introduced in this very well, however, nothing about the characters or the actions or events in of the story is mentioned in this prologue. The point of a prologue is to give information based on an event that happened before the story thus giving readers some sense of what is happening. I agree you have done that, but it is in a introduction form and not in an event or story form. The plot is good and it seems to be in a good form although you might want to change the story to a tragedy. Hope you keep writing or typing :D
ReplyDeleteI like this story :)
ReplyDeleteThis may actually be a awesome story.
ReplyDeleteLol, we want moree!!
Although, I think that you explained to much information about the story in the prologue.
Anyways.. Good luck - Ill be reading..
Wow. very interesting. Like to hear more of it soon.
ReplyDeleteGood luck with the story.